Sweet as Vanilla

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  1. T3F Chaser

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    Ok, I've decided to put away my sad stuff for a while and try to write some positive stuff. This poem is a true story about my role model/dance teacher Camilla from So You Think You Can Dance Australia. Plz post critisism!

    Here we go!

    SWEET AS VANILLA
    Since the beginning of last year,
    I was filled with fear
    Now that you’re not near
    I sometimes shed a tear

    We’ve had our laughs
    Our cries
    Our troubles
    And tries

    But above all spectacular
    You’re still sweet as vanilla

    When you came in everyday
    And all the things you say
    Help me in every way
    And look where I am today

    I’ve been Excellent
    I’ve been bad
    I’ve been sick
    And I’ve been sad

    But on top of all the mess
    You’re still the best

    You were really good
    Everything I understood
    Did everything I could
    And you did what you should

    Our friendship is strong
    We did almost nothing wrong
    I wish you stayed long
    But the TV is where you belong

    And above all the lies
    Above the stressful times
    I think I should consider
    You being as sweet as Vanilla

    And you’re my role model, Miss Camilla