Off to War

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  1. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    I dunno why, but I was thinking about all of those soilders out there who leave their families to go fight in the war... People are always saying how it's sad for the soilder to leave their family, but how does the family feel? They probably feel sad, as well. I decided to write a poem in the viewpoint of a young girl who's dad is leaving to go fight in the war.

    I can't believe this.
    I can't believe you're going.
    I'll miss you, daddy.
    Don't be gone long.

    I'll miss your sweet kisses
    When I go to bed at night.
    I'll miss your gentle hugs
    When I'm feeling sad.

    I don't like to see you leave,
    But I know you want to.
    I just want you to know
    That I'm proud of you, daddy.

    I'm glad to see you
    Defending this country,
    Even though I'm going to
    Miss you so much.

    Daddy, you're crying...
    Please don't be sad.
    Me and mama
    Can take care of ourselves.

    But before you go,
    Please promise me this:
    Promise me that
    You'll come back.
     
  2. Last of the Organization Twilight Town Denizen

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    A very good subject....very good feeling....good poem and good remembrance Destiny....*hug*....
     
  3. T3F Chaser

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    Omg that was good *tears up*. you really caught the feeling of it. Good Job!
     
  4. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *hugs* Thanks, guys :) Glad you like it ^-^
     
  5. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

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    i love it! :glomp:
     
  6. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    Thankies! ^-^