true true.
>_< i can tell.
i put one upp!!!!! x3
yes, yes i know... i like it ^^
lol, hey guys, whats up?m ugh, i've been sufering from allergies these past three weeks, i swear the next time i cough i'm gonna cough up blood, or just sufficate and die.....
-_-; you are so weird saint.
-.- i get that, but whyd ya say it? >.<
where'd that come from?....
hi hi!!!!!!
hi hi Rosey! <3
holaz my anime loving friend!
hiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!
i dont think its a bad idea.... grah! this new style is confusing me!!!!!!!! x_X
whats going on?
ok, this is annoying. i'm gonna post this and then start my new chapter because i'm stuck after this. its REALLY short just so you know, but here it is.... ~|Chapter Fifteen|~ A Friend Returns I had run off to get Cloud and Aerith as Sora went to get Christie and Merlin. Once we got all of them to Vincent, and he explained his idea and showed them the spell book, Aerith and Merlin started to work. Christie and Cloud were still dazed and I laughed. I watched as Merlin and Aerith both chanted a spell. There was so much ink from the symbols around the spot where Zack was. Christie, Cloud and I stood a little ways from the symbols, all really nervous. Sora and the others waited outside, sometimes peeking inside. After Merlin and Aerith were finished chanting they each stood on opposite ends of the circle and held up their hands, white light illuminating from their hands. We all gasped as a bright light enveloped Zack as he tightened his eyes in apprehension and a fierce wind passed by all of us. Soon the white light started to form into the shape of a man. I started to recognize the shape as the shape of his black hair grew on his head, his muscular arms and gloved hands forming, his SOLDIER uniform becoming clear along with the buster sword on his back. A wide grin spread across my face as the light faded to reveal Zack in his human form. He sat up and shook his head, rubbing it with his hand, “That didn’t help my head at all…..†he muttered My grin grew wider as he froze and looked at his hand, a slight smile forming on his lips as he stretched his familiar hand. Everyone except Merlin jumped forwards and tackled Zack, all completely happy that he was back to his normal form that we had recognized. He yelped loudly when the weight of two teenagers, a grown man, and a grown woman all collapsed on him, but he had that normal wide grin that I hadn’t seen in a while After that… interesting ordeal, I was finally fed up with Riku’s behavior and I walked up to Ansem’s lab, looking around at the destroyed room and walking through the doorway onto the translucent floor- that is, after I scared myself half to death because of it being translucent. I walked to the computer room and frowned when I saw Riku starring at the screen. I walked in and put my hand on his shoulder, making him jump. I frowned as he looked at me. He looked down. “Bailey I-†I shook my head and made him turn and look at me “Riku, there’s nothing you can do, you have to know that. All we can do is keep going. If we stop now then how will we be able to keep everything from going wrong?†Riku starred at me then looked down. I looked at him and smiled gently; he blinked and looked up as I hugged him. “You worry too much you know that? Just be glad that it isn’t severe yet.†Riku sighed and hugged me back, tightly. We came back out and automatically fell asleep when we got back since it was so late. I was one of the first ones to get up, as usual, and I wandered off to the waterway again, just to think. Everything was going by way too quickly. /.\./.\./.\./.\./.\./.\./.\./.\./.\ next time on: Destiny and the Unforeseen ~|Bailey: "wait.... Riku's not coming?"|~ 'we got a distress call from the Seiretei!' 'what?! whats going on?!' ~|Sora: "no, he and King Mickey are going to go check on something, and because Aerith is going to teach Kairi white magic, it looks like its gonna be you and me."|~ 'what?! Rukia's exicution date has been moved up?!' ~|"well, we'll be ok."|~ next time: 'Seiretei's confution: the true enemy' ~|"stay tuned!"|~
thanks both of you. and thanks for the advice Chervalier
this is a story i'm writing and i'm going to try and get it published, but to do that i'm gonna need to get some advice, so if anything is wrong with it, please tell me. here is the Preface Preface “Have we located her?” a young man shrouded in a black cloak asked as he prowled down a small hall and into a room containing a few medics and scientists. A woman turned in her chair while pushing up her glasses with her ring finger, the gleam on the lenses hiding her eyes. Her faded brown hair tied up in a messy bun at the base of her head, and a white coat hanging limply beside her thighs. “Yes sir, soon we will be able to obtain her from Kyame.” She said. The man approached her and leaned in to her chair height level, a red glow coming from his piercing eyes. “Just know that if you people mess this up, your memories will be drained, and you’ll be thrown to the demons.” He warned in an ominous voice. Everyone glanced over from their work to look at the two. The back of the woman’s neck began to dampen with sweat as the eyes behind her glasses filled with horror and anxiety. “Y-yes sir… we won’t let you down.” She said and quickly turned back to her monitor. The man smirked slightly before turning to one of the medics as he stumbled up, “S-sir, B-Bailey’s condition is starting to improve; we m-might not be in need of the other o-one…” the young boy muttered. The man stared at the medic before looking up at a large containment filled with a green tinted fluid. The young man stared up at a girl not much younger than he. Her faded hazel brown eyes stared blankly down in front of her, her long dark honey-brown hair gently flowing around her. A mask hung tightly around her mouth and nose and sent her oxygen as different wires attached themselves to her skinny arms and legs. The man walked to the containment and gently put a hand on the glass“If that is to come true, and Bailey wakes up, then we will obliterate the one held by Kyame.”
heya fam, hows things been goin for ya?
todays been going weird for me <_>
grrrrrr........
