/stillsingle
I agree with Plums. There were several places where your pronouns didn't fit the story. For example, the first sentence of paragraph 2, you switched Clawtooth and Chev's names. In the next sentence, you used she instead of he. Other than that, it not bad. I'm not going to go into s&g because you used summaries, so I'm just going to say, I liked the story. I can imagine this actually happening as an anime, which adds to the realism. I can't wait for the next part!
New! CatBox! With convineint handle, shaped to look just like a real cat's tail! Buy now!
What're you doing? Other than collapsing into bed and sleeping. What's the project/homework/assignment?
YAY!!! *omomnom*
Tell your sixteen-year-old self to work on your spelling. EDITS that Stella girl thinks you're hot video games
Ok, I don't know why, but that lip twitch about 3 seconds in makes me laugh.
You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Marushi again. You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Marushi again. You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Marushi again. You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Marushi again. FFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUU- It's not often I get to see someone insult Zter, and have it be legit.
I can has cookie?
I suggest Pirate Bay. For all your pirating needs. ^-^
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Haha. It's a kitty. Meow!!
Can't wait to finally watch that movie.
This is basically the only reason I'm still here.
According to this^, the Earth's already been destroyed. Great job guys.
No, you have an eyepatch. Those are different.
Soooo..... Does this mean you're bringing it back?
That's what I'm asking him to do. Define himself based on how he sees himself. Alternately, I'm asking her to define herself based on how she sees herself.
Noparse? Wonder what that means... [noparse]Meow. [/noparse]
Koi have viruses. Those dirty *******s.
