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*sees your location* tardis ;_;

^ this person speaks the truth. Plumpness= enough food= wealth, and everybody liked wealth :v For example, in Tudor times, Henry VIII was drawn so huge and broad to show his vast wealth.

Besides, preference in appearences changes all the time- perhaps in a few decades, it'll be "good" to be plump again~

Your post was a bit of an exagerration, by the way- size 2 is hardly a limit before you become "fat" :l

Since when has Pattinson quit being Edward's actor? I look at the news everyday lol~

I feel pretty sorry for Rob, although your thread title was a bit over the top- it made me think numerous people were committing suicide :l

Well, it'd be kind of hard to please my family. My mum's pretty racist and would probably throw out anyone who wasn't white. She actually said to me before "it's okay if you bring guys home, as long as they're not black." .__.

I'd probably still stay with someone my family didn't like but talk to whoever had the problem and tell them if it's their issue they can stay out of our way~

Your writing has improved immensely, but I can still spot those common errors such as mispelt words or a lack of punctuation where it is needed. Considered using a spellchecker? Reading over your work or getting somebody else to read it is always a good thing too~

Although I do have one question- why is he a "British blond" if he lives in Wonderland?

There is a good trick for seeing if you've missed vital punctuation in a sentence- read the sentence aloud to yourself and see if the rhythm sounds okay and that you can do it readily in the amount of allocated breaths.

It was a bit purple prose here- a sudden chunk of description that was slightly over the top. Remember, your sentences should be a mix of actions and description, especially if you're introducing the character for the first time. Nice use of adverbs though (:

*leaves whoopie cushions* >D

The language xD Gotta learn a lot of the body parts and stuff for my martial arts. :B

There would be no pride or fun in home cooking if everyone resorted to easy food.

I'm chuckling at the glares I'm getting from bottom-left. xD

good, I'm pretty happy c: I'm attempting to study Korean right now though and failing. xD

I'm assuming you don't mean a lighted match. xD

That's actually a pretty good idea. o.O

First symptom- throwing up feathers.

It was beautiful, and just the right length for somebody passing through to be compelled to read. The personification of the wind and the rain and the way they were described as gluttonous really caught my attention. Each paragraph seemed to describe "Catherine" in completely different ways to me. The firework one was especially good, it was violent and "she reduces herself to tiny figments hoping that they would somehow come to carry eachother's burdens" was excellent.

I don't have any complaints, this was executed rather finely~

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A hurrhurr good one. Don't spam this just to keep it alive. There doesn't need to be five different people asking if this will be continued.

I have my eye on you guys >|

^ lol, since when were breasts perfectly equal anyway? xD

I can see you worked long and hard on this, but naturally a few errors were made. The flick of hair on the top of her hair looks extremely 2D and flat like a fold in paper. A good tutorial for hair and bangs is here. Take a look at the Dot & Guide method.

I prefer the colored version with lines to the one without. The contours of the body and the face have all but disappeared in the version without lines. Perhaps you could find a mid-point? E.g. existing lines are lightened or just some are taken away.

I really like the skirt, btw. (:

heythere gorgeous c: How's it going?

I love you too xD

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