Recent Content by Sinister-Handed

I highly doubt it. They are 'perfect' video game people with Pepsodent-smiles... By the way, no one in that game, except for VERY few characters (Disney) wear glasses (just a thing I wanted to point out...).

But I haven't really paid much attention to their (abnormal) teeth. Except in that close-up picture of Auron's teeth. They actually weren't glued together (oh, a miracle!).

Warning: Spoilers ahead!

I agree with many of you: I don't think Sora is "an evil nobophobic serial killer". He didn't destroy Nobodies because they were Nobodies, but because they did things that seemed mean to him (I'm NOT saying they weren't mean things).

Organization XIII wanted to have hearts as we know. We also know their way to obtain their hearts were harming people and messing the world order. In Chain of Memories, the Organization members in Castle Oblivion seemed much more evil than the members in KHII. I mean, messing with someone's memories to take over the Organization and assasinating fellow members and all that.

The thing tha tbugged me most was Yen Sid and (especially) DiZ's attitude towards Nobodies. "They dont' have the right to be", "They are merely empty shells, destined to fade back into darkness" (Okay, i know those weren't exact quotes but close enough). THAT'S what I'm ready to call "nobophobic" (I like the word, by the way). I think that kind of attitude affected Sora as well a little, but he did show some compassion to them.

By the way, in Halloween Town (2nd visit) when they discussed about Dr. Finkelstein's experiment and how it wanted to have a heart, Sora said that he felt bad for it. I wonder if he realized then that Organization also was after the same goal...

The Organization and Sora and co. both had different goals that may not have been in harmony. That means there can't be two winners (because it's the way in many stories, NOT just Disney's, thank you very much). And sinceOrganization XIII was "the bad group", they were the ones who had to lose. That's how it goes.

And the conclusion of this pointless rambling: No, Sora only did what he had to and he had to defeat the Organization because they were hurting people and causing trouble in the worlds. The Organization did bad things, but I don't think they were pure evil, they just wanted to have hearts.

This is only my opinion. Sorry about the possible spelling errors, I'm lazy and not bothering to check the errors this time.

I don't think they are very evil... they are just... uh... being Nobodies! I just wonder why it would have been so terrible if they actually go ttheir hearts back? Nothing, I guess. Well, yeah, they DID do everything mean, like hurt people by releasing the Heartless into the worlds and forcing Naminé to alter people's memories so they could control Sora...
But anyway, I think DiZ and Yen Sid and all those people who keep saying that Nobodies shouldn't exist are VERY narrow-minded. I really don't like that kind of, uh... discrimination! "Only people who have hearts have the right to live!" that is NOT true! (Wow, that sounded biologically odd). Okay, I'm done.

To sum it up: Organization XIII did some things that were wrong but I don't think they are evil. Some of them maybe can't act like 'good guys' because they don't have feelings, but in the end, they just want to exist.

Actually I'm NOT suffering from lack of sleep. I sleep healthy amount of hours almost every night. My mind just works in a strange manner sometimes... or most of the time. I usually write what first pops into my head. But I really meant when I said this story was great.

Like many other people, I also like this story. You have really good writing styles and great descriptions.

The plot is original and I can see you are either creative or then falling asleep head full of thoughts (most likely both). And you do write fast! I guess you have pretty clear image of what is happening...
Hey! Look! I'm doing it again! Writing everything pointless and obvious... Pointless and obvious... wow, I actually thought for a second that that rhymes! I guess I should stop now. Yeah, I'll do it.
Anyway, keep writing (I'm not pushing, I just can see you have a great story).
Okay, I'm done.

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I read your story when it came out... but I'm kinda lazy at commenting. Sorry. Anyway: your story was very well written and I want to see when this is going. It's very interesting. Nothign negative, really. Especially when you said you are going to post the next chapter!

Like many have said: it's an original idea. I also agree with many other points people have brought up.
I like almost everything magical and the Keyblade can also do more than just cruelly kill everyone around you (it does that too...).
But most of all: I love keys! They are something people have relied on for so many years (and are becoming more and more unreliable as the locks are easy to brake... haven't tried, though). Such a small (or in Keyblade's case: not so small) item that can open doors and... look so beautiful. I'm taking about old-fashioned ones in that beautiful-comment.

That was awesome! So great! So funny and so creative! I loved it.
There was only one problem: my parents got very annoyed because of my constant (and loud) laughing.
I really enjoyed this one! Thank you!
That was all I have to say... I'm speechless.

I keep somewhat low profile about being a KH fan. I actually spent two years without saying 'Kingdom Hearts' out loud... maybe once or twice (I would call THAT crazy). That was before KHII was out. I did think about KH almost all the time. That was painful time. I didn't have any friends who were into KH that time so... I was sad.

This is not so 'mad', but too I doodle KH everywhere in my notebooks at school. I have an obsession for keys and keyholes, especially old-fashioned ones. I refuse to use the word 'nobody' if there's a possibility of understanding it as 'a Nobody'... good thing I don't speak English as my first language.

And some other random stories:

There was this sentence in my English work/textbook:
"... instead of suffering from the shame of it all and being a nobody..."
I nearly cracked up, but I was able to keep my laughter very, very silent. I was in class and the teacher might have not liked it...

In one classroom there were numbered seats. I rushed to take the seat number 13 and dedicaded a poem to it.

Once my mom said something like: "Nobody can see it." and she happened to say it in English. I turned around and yelled: "ROXAS!"
He was the first one I thought about. My mom didn't get it.

Yeah, those are not very mad. Well, not mad at all. But I just felt like I wanted to post to this thread.

By the way: I'm lucky I don't go crazy every time I hear someone say 'Riku'. Lucky, because Riku is pretty common name here, where I live. No, I'm not Japanese.

Thank you for wasting your time and reading this (ha).

That was so beautiful! I loved the way you wrote and described everything. Yeah... maybe the others are right: the room description would have been nice, but I didn't miss that too much, the story was so great.

I don't want to push you or anything but if you want to write more fanfictions, write. That's if you want to not if... okay, you know what I mean...

I personally liked his voice. It fit very well to Sora's character. I don't think it was too childish, I mean, Sora's only 14 in the first Kingdom Hearts. Wasn't Haley Joel 14 when he did the voice-over for KH? I think he was. I've heard a lot 14-year-olds sounding pretty much like that. Okay, that's about all. I think Haley Joel did a great job. Again, just my opinion!

Also, almost all of voice actors were good! I'm not going to list those who weren't...

I've thought a lot about this! Here's my 'top 5'... And goes without saying (but I still say it) that number one is the one I feel sorry for the most. Okay:

1. Riku Replica
2. Axel
3. Riku
4. Roxas
5. ... hmm... this was supposed to be a top 5, but okay, I think it's just top 4 then...

Why?
Well, Riku Replica, he wasn't real, and he wanted to. When he actually remembered he WAS a fake, he wasn't so sympathetic, but when he was forced to 'remember' he was real and that his only purpose was protect Naminé... THEN I really felt sorry for him. When he found out he was fake and EVERYTHING he believed (well, almost everything) wasn't ture, there was nothing left in his life... not even the life, as he was a fabrication... All he had left were Sora and Naminé, like he said. But he didn't even know those people really. Sora wanted to be friends with him, though. And Replica's death was also really sad.
Axel and Roxas didn't really exist either. They both wanted to. I feel more sorry for Axel because he was left alone with feelings (like friendship) and he didn't know if he really felt or not. He wanted to find Roxas, who was his best friend. Axel finally sacrificed himself for Sora instead (or should I use that word, as Sora is practically Roxas). It was so sad he committed suicide 'cause he couldn't live without a heart. And so on...
As for Riku, I feel sorry for him 'cause he lost so much and achieved... so little. I mean yeah, he DID learn to control his darkness, but as he gave up his own physical form and turned into Xeha... he said himself he maybe hadn't had to fight Roxas at all... I feel sorry for him also because he was so ashamed that he didn't want to face his friends (what a big mistake)...
Roxas was a Nobody, but didn't remember about it. He wanted to have his own life but he couldn't. He had friends who he cared about, and had to leave them. Although, as he became whole with Sora, he can still live his life... I think Sora and Roxas are equal when it comes to Sora's being.
3/4 of these 'people' were not real or didn't really exist. That is the fact that always makes them sympathetic... at least in my opinion.

My avatar?

It's originally Shadow's (yeah, the Heartless) LEFT hand. I just messed something with Photoshop to make it look... weird? Thanks for asking!

Riku could just have bought them from somewhere... he spent time in Twilight Town while helping DiZ and he had to visit the town evey now and then at least. There seemed to be lots of stores on Market Street... although, shopping doesn't sound like Riku's favorite pastime. Getting the clothes from Mickey would be a good option as well.
Maybe it's just me, but there are a few things that bug me about Riku's clothes. Yeah, his clothes are cool and just his style... Anyway, when he was wearing the Organization coat, you could see him wearing also those black Organization clothes under it. But when he whips off his coat, he's wearing his KHII outfit.
Also, when Riku looks like Xehanort's Hearltess, he's not wearing the blindfold (as you know, in the Final Mix+ scene before he transforms into Xeha, he takes off his blindfold). When he turns back to his own form, he's wearing the blindfold again.
I know, those are just small details but I'm really strict about things like that.