Recent Content by RoxasXStar

I thought the intro was wonderfully done. I think it's better than the KH2 and 358 intro.
The falling down to darkness was what made me go "OMFG, they broke it! XD"
I'm excited and plan on watching it all in Japanese, and THEN buying it when it comes to the US.

I've played the game...
so yeah. I say it's a Roxas/Xion.
AND I KNOW XION'S "real" IDENTITY.
But I just choose to ignore it.

Oh my God. You're right. xD
Xion's death and Roxas CRYING made me tear up. It was terrible. And Roxas attempting to flee and contact Kingdom Hearts to save her...WAH D:
Oh. And Axel and the WINNER stick. Guess he WON a butt load of regret.

OOC: I'm here..xD
IC:
Larxene laughed as Namine was truly frightened. She snapped and a lightning bolt shocked the front of where Namine was standing. She laughed as she went downstairs to see Zexion.
"Hello, what are you doing now?" she asked rolling her eyes.

Yuna twirled around the streets of Spira. She was bored and lonely. So she decided to go and eat some ice cream, she got some and sat down on a bench.

Yuna,
may I be?
Please?

Larxene,
SOUND THE ALARM!

Played By: RoxasXStar
Appearance:
Special Ability: Mind Control
Define Special Ability: As it says, she can control minds, but not for a long time, thirty minutes max
Name: Valencia Rune
Age: 17
Side: (Intertwined Destinies, Not Sided, or Dark Alliance) Dark Alliance
Biography: (Optional) Always a saracastic girl, getting on the side that benifeted her the most. She was an orphan from birth, and grew up hating everyone.
Weapon: Second Chance: A sword, all black except the blade, a shocking silver, with red incriptions on the blade.
Theme Song: (optional)

Name: Vienna Amaraylis
Age: 17
Keyblade (it can be custom): Betrayal's Rose, looks a lot like Oblivion but it has a red rose for the keychain, with red incriptions on the base
Bio (optional): Born in Hollow Bastion, when she became thirteen she was put on the Hollow Bastion restorationg committee, now she lives in Radient Garden, an orphan that has the power of the darkness along with her keyblade.
Other: hey Ice, it's Vienna! :D

Yeah...
i need to lighten up the dialouge...lol
thanks for the tips! im happy that people are readng my story
ill try harder in the next chapter

Yeah... I'm working on the shortness, but I'm so happy I have a reader!!! YAY!
Oh and here's a new chapter!!!! YAY!! *its long!*

Chapter 3: Dream Caster
“So where to now?” I asked Kairi, who was busily checking off stores we had already visited on a check list.
“Um, omigod it’s Selphie!” she replied, running toward her friend.
“Hey Kairi! And who’s this?” Selphie asked, looking toward me.
“Oh that’s Vienna, she’s from Radiant Gardens, and came over here because… wait why did you come?” said Kairi turning toward me.
“Err, um… well it’s a long story,” I started.
“We have time, don’t we Selphie?”
“Yup, I don’t have to be home till eight, and it’s only 2.”
“Well, ok…”
Time passed as I told them about Sam, Courtney, Monique, and all my daily troubles, and up to when I found out I could use a Keyblade.
“So what’s the Keyblade’s name?” asked Kairi in awe.
“Dream Caster,” I said summoning it.
“It’s so cool!” said Selphie.
“It’s interesting, it just doesn’t match your personality.” said Kairi.
“That what I’ve been thinking about. It matches half of my personality, the other half is just not in here.” I said.
“Exactly, sometimes keyblades do that,” said Kairi referring to her flowery keyblade.
“At least you guys get to use one! I’m stuck with whatever I can lay my hands on!” said Selphie.
“Aww poor Selphie!” said Kairi laughing.
“So are we going to dye her hair? If the Org’s looking for her, she’s going to change that hair!” said Selphie, standing up from the chair, grabbing my hand, and soon enough we running toward the hair salon.
“What colors?” asked the hair stylist.
“Black and red.” I said, twirling my blue hair. A new me, I thought.
~ Back To Sam! ~
The screams of the 17 year old boy were the only things that were heard on the ship. He had well pressed the wrong button on the ship and was crash landing in The World That Never Was. He of course missed finals on Gummi Ship driving.
“Damn it, why did I have to miss finals!” Sam muttered as he saw the now crashed ship.
“Cursing yourself won’t help you,” a fiery voice said.
Sam turned around and looked everywhere.
“Who are you?” Sam yelled.
“You are forgetful,” the voice replied and out of the shadows came the red head himself, Axel.
“Hello Sam,” Axel said.
“Axel!” Sam yelled.
“Why so shocked?”
“Did you take her?? Where is she?”
“Who? What are you talking about Sam, wow,” Axel said rubbing his head, “You must be going insane.”
“No I’m not! If this is a trick the org is playing on me just tell me where she is!”
“Who are you talking about Sam… oh I remember now!” Axel said, smiling to himself.
“Do you have her?”
“No, we don’t have her, but soon we will and her nobody as well.”
“What! She has a nobody?!”
“Yes, of course she does! And her nobody, better for us, is her true personality! With her on our side, we could make up for Roxas, since he was a dual wielder, and she is too… so that helps us!” Axel said proudly.
“What…?”
“Well kid nice knowing you, you can’t be here, or anywhere, they sent me to destroy you, get it memorized, it will be the last time you hear that!” Axel’s chakrams flaring up.
“Ready for battle?” Axel said and then lashed his chakram against Sam’s arm, which was now a bloody mess. Sam quickly grabbed his blade and dodged another blow. The metal clashed as Sam hit the chakrams and used Hydroga.
“Water won’t help you!” Axel yelled as the water evaporated.
“Crud! Now what do I do!?” Sam thought as he hit another chakram.
“Stop being a wimp and fight!” Axel yelled as he slammed his chakram against Sam’s face, which now had blood gushing down. Sam fell to the floor. He couldn’t see anything.
“This is the end!”
“Imperta!” someone screamed, stopping time itself.
“Sam, are you ok?” asked a voice of a girl.
“Michelle?” Sam whispered.
“One and only, what the heck is wrong with you!? Fighting Axel?! For God’s sake, we need to get you cleaned up, can you walk?” Michelle asked.
“I don’t know,” Sam muttered. He felt so stupid being saved by a girl.
“Well we’re going to have to hurry, Imperta has a time limit you know,” Michelle said, helping Sam up and walking him back to her Gummi Ship.
“Michelle why are you here? In the World That Never Was… OW!” Sam winced.
“Well if you stop moving it wouldn’t burn that much!” Michelle said impatiently as she soaked Sam’s face with a potion. “I was sent here by the gang in Radiant Garden, ya know Cloud and the rest, they thought you would need some assistance in your journey, plus they knew you missed finals in Gummi Ship driving,” Michelle continued as she patted Sam’s face with a sponge.
“All done,” Michelle said.
“Thanks,” Sam said as he sat down on a chair.
“So, where to know?”
“Who said you were going with me?”
“I did,”
“No, you belong in Radiant Gardens where it’s safe,”
“You’re not making me go back and you know that, plus Monique told me to annoy you as much as possible and being her sister and all and Vienna’s second best friend, I have as much right to come.”
“Michelle you’re impossible,”
“I know I am, now I’m going to be driving, since I didn’t miss finals,” Michelle said as she got in the drivers seat.
“Destiny Islands,” Sam said before Michelle could ask anything.
“Okay then, hold on!” Michelle said as she pressed a button and the ship started to fly.
“So what’s her Keyblade’s name?” Michelle asked.
“I really don’t know…” Sam muttered.
“WHAT?! You don’t even know your own girlfriend’s keyblade?!” Michelle screamed.
“She’s not my girlfriend.” Sam glared at Michelle.
“Oh right your with Courtney the wh-“Michelle didn’t finish her sentence since Sam had his blade at hand.
“Sorry,” Michelle muttered.
“It’s alright, sorta” Sam replied looking at his bandaged arm.
“We’re going to find her, before the Org does.”
“What if we don’t Michelle?”
“Well, we’re doomed.”
“You’re sure optimistic,”
“Well, you’ll see more of my wonderful optimistic self on the trip.”
“Great,”
“Okay, we can’t have sarcasm too!”
~*~ Vienna ~*~
“So Vienna, how do you like your new look?” Selphie asked, looking at my layered black hair.
“I think it’s better than before,” I said, laughing.
“So what are we going to do now? Meet up with the guys?” Kairi asked.
“Just because you want to be with Sora, doesn’t mean you get to drag all of us!” Selphie said laughing.
“Sure,” I said, laughing as well.
So the three girls started walking toward the dock when they saw a different girl, one they haven’t seen on the island, well Selphie and Kairi have never seen her…
“Valencia,” I muttered.
“Who?” Kairi and Selphie asked simultaneously.
“She’s,” I gulped, “my nobody.”
“Hold up! You’ve killed yourself?!” Kairi shot.
“Yeah, I have killed myself, that’s how Valencia comes in,” I muttered.
“WHY?!” Selphie screamed.
“Are you emo!? Did you wish for death!?” Kairi’s voice had some hysteria in it.
“I told you my Keyblade only matched half of me,” I said.
“Oh my gosh Vienna,” Kairi muttered to herself.
But then Valencia saw them.
“Run!” I hissed as we dashed into the nearest store, hoping Valencia wouldn’t see them.
“Vienna,” a voice hissed.
“Crap.” I thought before answering, “Valencia,” I said curtly.
“I see you have friends with you,” Valencia said, indifferently.
“Yeah, and?” I asked.
“Oh it makes the game much more fun.” Valencia said, chuckling and then snapped. All of the sudden seven heartless surround the group.
“Oh my God,” Kairi and Selphie said.
“Well, I must leave, I wouldn’t want to kill you all right away, so I’ll let the heartless do that,” Valencia said, smirking and then disappeared.
“So…” I said, as Kairi summoned her keyblade, and I followed. Selphie got out her blitzball and threw it up.
“Ready?” Kairi asked, swinging her keyblade.
“Bring it,” I said, slamming Dream Caster against a heartless. The fight began.

Oh MY God.
That was amazing, wow.
seriously.. wow.
I really can't wait for the Roxas vs. Roxas battle.
rotfl,
Riku making jokes means everythings serious.
awesome chapter

Amazing
It's the first time that I've read, that Riku, well dies.
Cliffhanger... very good one.
Now I want to read More.
lol
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