Glad to hear you're nearly done. Sorry I didn't give any feedback on your work but my computer's got a virus so I'm using either my dad's computer or my PS3 to go on the internet until my computer's fixed or I get a replacement
That was a quick chapter. Anyway, I mentioned the website about where I thought it could be a good opening if it was like a tv show and here's the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E2w2R39QV4Q
Don't worry, it's just an opinion.
Nice chapters so far. I bet Yzma will be more madly concerned about Kuzco being still alive than she would about the hedgehog potion Kronk dropped. (snickers)
The 'Huge Waterfall' chapter was good. What I don't believe is that after all of the worlds Sora, Sonic and went to so that they could get the chaos emeralds, 4 of the emeralds they found were fake! It's almost like Eggman used technology similar to what the Meterax from Sonic X used to make the fake emeralds or took a page from Tails' book and made the fake emeralds himself. Maybe even advanced the technology if those fakes can fool Shadow. I wonder what wil happen next.
I never expected Sora and co. to end up in world of Emperor's new groove, let alone Sora turning into a hedgehog. Oh and about the email I gotten rid of before, I actually did some counting through the other chapters. Its 1 in Station Square, 2 in Port Royal, 2 in Twilight Town, 2 in TWTNW, 2 in Agrabah and so that makes 9 unless you do some editing on at least two or more of the chapters.
Great work! I was playing an mv of 'A Whole New World' while looking at the lyrics here and I could just imagine Sora and Kairi about to kiss each other at the end of the song. Too bad Shadow interrupted though. And Sora was so close too!
It should be interesting to see how having Hara and Ryoko there will affect the new worlds they and the others will go to like, for example, The Land of Dragons or Pride Land.
I looked at it a few times and I gotta say, a few errors e.g. how did the Lord of Dragons get special summoned? Other than that, everything else looks good so far.