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I'll be the killer teehee

Played by-Naminesgirl
Name-Edward
Age-17
Gender-male
Appearance-pale skin and beautiful eyes that change colors, he has black hair that comes down to his chin and long bangs sweeping to the side, he wears normal traveling clothes and a black cloak
Abilties-very agile and fast
Specizes- lying and swordplay
Bio-learned in story
Other-he walks with a speed and grace rarely seen

can I have Denzel BTW I'll start if needed

your welcome very much :D

yeah I am sorry about the errors but every time I corected one tiny little one the computer would freak and make me type it over again, ALL of it so I'll try to be better about that and now.......

CHAPTER 3

They sll were seated at a round table in a small, yet comfortable room off of the library(sp?). Riku gripped the arms of his chair.

"So you're telling us that those creatures were called soul eaters and that they take the souls of the ones they catch, making them puppets and the only way to get them back is to stab the soul eater in the chest with a sword thingy?" asked Sora.

"Its called a Haitou, I've seen them before." Riku said.

Mickey nodded.

"Yes, you'll find one for each of you on your beds, Riku will teach you how to use them."

They nodded and walked back to train.​

sorry its so short my dad is breathing down my neck so I gotta go for a little while bye

well you could go really far with the plot, its great. Um..really good story but you might wanna do a couple spell checks if you aren't sure how its spelled, of course a lot of people have typos so not too bad but also try to use a teeny bit more punctuation and enter after the speaking like so:

Kiari was in the castle.

“I wonder why I’m hear.†Kiari thought.

Just then Minney and Daisy walked out and saw her.

“Hello there†Minney said.

“hi†Kiari said then bowed.

“Hello I’m Daisy and this is Quean Minney.†Daisy said.

“nice to meet you!†Kiari replied.

“we are about to go shoping. Would you like to join?†Minney asked.

“sure!†Kiari said

it usually helps us to tell who is saying what. Also to make it more interesting(if thats possible) try to describe their surroundings and their emotions. Just a little friendly advice, take it or leave it I don't mind and no offense meant, like I said before its a great plot and you could go really far with it :)

teehee I know who it is and thats great, keep going

zomg!!! really? *squeals* yea I'll get right to work on the next chapter

thanks you guys and sorry for the long wait but here is chapter 2!!! yeah!

CHAPTER 2

Kairi slowly opened her eyes, a large pain in her head. She looked at the ceiling but realized something. This ceiling was smooth and ornamently decorated, not the rough, dark wood on Destiny Island. SHe sat up but a hand pushed her down. Her eyes wandered over and she saw an egshausted(sp?) yet happy Sora.

"I'm glad you're finally awake, are you in pain?"

"Not too much, just a little headache," she replied, confused.

How had they gotten here? More importantly where was here? Suddenly she remembered the creatures and sat up.

"Where is everyone else?"

Sora's face seemed to stone.

He replied softly," Well Riku, Namine, Roxas, and Tidus made but....Kairi, Wakka and Selphie are dead."

He put a hand on her shoulder. She looked just like she felt, like somone had slapped her across the face.

"Dead?"she said in a whisper.

Tears swam in her eyes and she buried her face in Sora's shoulder. He hugged her.

"They died bravely and without regret, they died like heroes and I think thats how they wanted to go."

She nodded numbly.

"Lets go down to the hall, I"m sure the others will be glad to see you," Sora suggested carefully.

Kairi nodded again and got up. With Sora, she walked down the stairs and into the Great Hall. As they had walked down the stairs she had realized that they really were in Disney Castle. The doors swung open and all went quiet. The little group at the front, surrounding the throne turned. The group consisted of: Yuffie( who looked a lot less perky than usual),Tifa(with her gloves still on)standing by Cloud(who looked like someone had ripped his heart out and torn it to bits) Riku(I won't even tell you how badly he was hurt), Tidus(who was just as bad as Riku). Namine(her dress torn in places and cuts all over her) being hugged by Roxas(who was just as bad as Tidus and Riku). The group parted to let Mickey through. He didn't say anything but gave a deep bow. He then led Sora and Kairi up to where the others were.

"The meeting shall come to order," he said.​

Sasuke please

Name:Jake
Age: 17
Appearance:
Bio: learned in story
Gender: male

can we start?

name:Kelvin
age:17
gender:male
world: Radiant Gardens(Hollow Bastion)
keyblade: Way To Dawn
appearance:

Riku and Kelvin(oc)

Name: Kelvin
Age: 16
Occupation thing: Keyblade Wielder
Hair: brown
Eyes: one blue and one green